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26 - what she's posting what is this madness 
21st-May-2009 03:35 pm
Hey hey can peeps help me with this picture maybe? Crits plz



But anyway I'm making pinups of my favorite girls (and some other uh, qualified contenders) and I just want to know if they're coming out... cute enough? Or really if you have any crits give 'em to me. I dunno I guess... does she look, like, tiny enough? She's supposed to be super small and have itty-bitty-titties but I don't know. Maybe I should give her some more hip?

This is just a sketch; I'm going to be putting it on some nicer drawing paper and then inking and coloring it with colored pencils. Or maybe something else? what do you guys think.
21st-May-2009 09:19 pm (UTC)

Her face is suuuuuuper cute (love the goggles!) and I think you've got a really good base here. I can see a couple of areas where she looks a little stiff though, if that makes sense? And I can see how she would look itty bitty but IDK her boobs actually look kinda normal-sized to me... how small is she supposed to be? I think her thigh could actually be a little thicker too.

I'm gonna try redlining this in a sec, that always gives me a better feel for the structure... if you want me to post it for you I will but if not I'll just see what I can ~deduce~ and see if that's helpful and stuff.
21st-May-2009 09:24 pm (UTC)
no go ahead and post the redline I'd like to see what you mean. I can't ever draw stuff that's *not* stiff so help plz yes

Also I've already fiddled a little bit with her thighs so I think they look a tad better. I'll fiddle with her titties (lolololol) and see if I can't get them to look smaller? She's like a b-cup sorta. Not mosquito bites but you know.
21st-May-2009 09:29 pm (UTC)
Okay b cup is less itty bitty than I was thinking, that's very helpful :D

I'll get right on it! <3
21st-May-2009 09:30 pm (UTC)
it's hard judging what's a small titty when you're a C-38 and your girlfriend is like a DD :|
21st-May-2009 09:52 pm (UTC)
god I know right blaaah

anyway here y'are lassie :D
21st-May-2009 09:57 pm (UTC)
THANK YOU I am terrible at chest cavities. I'll definitely take that advice. :D
21st-May-2009 09:23 pm (UTC)
I think it'd look great with ink and colored pencils!! :D The only thing I might change about the pose is her right (our left) arm in the shoulder region, where the line from her torso comes up...I can't really explain it though so I might just show you in person if I can, and even then you might have gotten it right and I'm just a tard :1

ANYWAY I think it'd be lovely with color! <3 Go for it!
21st-May-2009 09:27 pm (UTC)
I think I know what you mean? I'll go mess with it and when you come over later get a bit-o feedback again
21st-May-2009 09:33 pm (UTC)
Oh, it's so cute and cheerful!

I'm not an artist so I can't really crit you, but I love the feeling I'm getting from it. It's just, peaceful and sweet. ♥

And as someone with aforementioned itty bitty titties, I'd say they're pretty much the right size.
21st-May-2009 09:40 pm (UTC)
hahaha thanks so muchhhh <3

You know even if you're not an artist, if anything ever looks funny don't be afraid to point it out for me! Just like you don't need to be a chef to know if food tastes weird :9 I like any feedback I can get!
21st-May-2009 09:46 pm (UTC)
Oh, I know what you mean! But I'm saying, like, 'No, I can't see anything wrong with it.' XD I'm sure they're probably is because nothing's perfect but heck if I can tell!
21st-May-2009 09:43 pm (UTC)
I love the pose. :D

Also, there is nothing itty-bitty about b-cups. They're pretty much the perfect size, imo. *b-cup* XD
21st-May-2009 09:46 pm (UTC)
yeaaah for a lesbian I sure don't know much about the titty-spectrum :|

lol thanks
21st-May-2009 09:57 pm (UTC)
XD it's really hard judging based off numbers and letters alone, though. B-Cups look really small on some people and large on others. Same goes for other cups.
21st-May-2009 11:11 pm (UTC)
Her left upper arm (from shoulder to elbow) is too short.

The head looks a bit large, but perhaps you wanted a big-headed look.

Everything else looks fine.
22nd-May-2009 05:39 am (UTC)
I meant her to be a tiny-person - like, kinda short (5'2" ish I guess) - at one point I made her torso longer but I thought it looked kind of funny and made her too tall-looking but I'm not really good at manipulating structure? I see what you mean though now that I've been away from it for a while. Thanks so much! :) I've already begun inking so I'll make sure not to let that happen on the next one.

Though I haven't inked her arm so I'll pull that out a bit :D thank you!
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