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26 - what she's posting what is this madness 
21st-May-2009 03:35 pm
Hey hey can peeps help me with this picture maybe? Crits plz



But anyway I'm making pinups of my favorite girls (and some other uh, qualified contenders) and I just want to know if they're coming out... cute enough? Or really if you have any crits give 'em to me. I dunno I guess... does she look, like, tiny enough? She's supposed to be super small and have itty-bitty-titties but I don't know. Maybe I should give her some more hip?

This is just a sketch; I'm going to be putting it on some nicer drawing paper and then inking and coloring it with colored pencils. Or maybe something else? what do you guys think.
21st-May-2009 11:11 pm (UTC)
Her left upper arm (from shoulder to elbow) is too short.

The head looks a bit large, but perhaps you wanted a big-headed look.

Everything else looks fine.
22nd-May-2009 05:39 am (UTC)
I meant her to be a tiny-person - like, kinda short (5'2" ish I guess) - at one point I made her torso longer but I thought it looked kind of funny and made her too tall-looking but I'm not really good at manipulating structure? I see what you mean though now that I've been away from it for a while. Thanks so much! :) I've already begun inking so I'll make sure not to let that happen on the next one.

Though I haven't inked her arm so I'll pull that out a bit :D thank you!
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